Wednesday, October 03, 2007

Will you dance with me?

Odat tagged me with the Jezebel Meme. Hers was hilarious!

The rules for The Jezebel Meme:
It's simple. Tell your favorite dance story and pass the groovy beat to five be-bopping bloggers. I tag....






...and now...
My very first slow dance...

Matt had come to visit me at home. He stayed for a few days- days that seemed to pass like minutes. I knew, with every passing hour, that his visit would end way too soon. I wanted to hold on to each minute-- I silently begged the hourglass to slow down so I could be with him just a moment longer. But the day came, the hour came. He was supposed to have left on Sunday morning, right after church, but somehow he stayed until the afternoon. And then the sun set. And still he lingered.

We both knew he had to leave. It was dark outside, and rainy, but I walked him out to his car anyway. The motion light by the house was on, but I couldn't make out his features. I was glad he couldn't see mine, because a hundred silent tears were running down my cheeks. We stood by his car, my face smashed into his shoulder, for I don't know how long. I could hear him breathing, could feel him breathing. I didn't want to stop feeling him breathing.

We didn't say much. He kissed me.

Then Matt took my hand and whispered in my ear, "Will you dance with me?"

So we danced. Under the clouds, in the dark, in the drizzle. We had no music, we had no hardwood floors. We danced to a chorus of raindrops.

It was perfect.

10 remarks:

Aero said...
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Aero said...

I remember that dance. It really was perfect. The rain held the perfect rhythm for a slow dance (our first of many). I love reading your stories (especially when they are true). You do a wonderful job of capturing a moment in words. Please keep writing.

I love you lala.

Me.

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

i love you too lala and your story made me cry...

hugs, grammy

Mags said...

Oh, what a wonderful story Lala! Mine will be similar to yours, only the season will be different. (I think I posted about it recently, but I could have dreampt that!LOL)

I will work on mine and post it up later today.

Odat said...

oh wow!!!!!!!!!! that was absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!!!
I'm crying!!!! ;-)
Peace

Sarge Charlie said...

You make and old sarge wish he was young again, very nice post.

I have responded

Mags said...

Mine's up now too!!!

katherine. said...

what a wonderful romatic memory...thank you for sharing with everyone...

Mimi Lenox said...

Oh my gosh....that was beautiful. You know, when I started this meme it was a funny story on my blog about a crazy singles dance. I knew that people might want to talk about their dancing memories.
And my, oh my, have they ever...
Perfect.
Thank you for sharing.

Mimi

Sandee (Comedy +) said...

Mimi tagged me for this one too, so I'll include you in that post. Thanks Lala, and this was beautiful. Young love is so beautiful. Sixty-nine days until Matt time. :)